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Incidental title - 9652 by ~CyanidePoisoning:iconCyanidePoisoning:





How queer my mind can be
To hear to every tree
Close my eyes and listen to the fuzz
Thinking how it is not something made
Just something that was
©2004-2009 ~CyanidePoisoning
:iconcyanidepoisoning:

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One of my more "inspired" poems. I wrote this one night while hanging out with DJ and Sandy on Paul's porch. I stopped to try and listen to every sound the night was making.. and this came out. I can't decide if I like it or not.

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:iconkuroi-ryu:
The only line that I can think of that doesn't make sense is the second one. Did you mean adhere? *shrugs* I dunno. Anyway, I really like this! Short but sweet. ^^

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I fell in love with the impossible
I fell in love with tomorrow
but tomorrow never came.
Tomorrow became today
:iconcyanidepoisoning:
no i mean hear.. like to listen to everyone. I might change it to "To hear every tree" but that's not the same conotation.. so.. I think i'll leave it. I was hearing to every tree.... at least that what I thought I was doing. ... like i said it was "inspired"

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:music: come on baby, won't you show me what you got yeah, i want your salvation......
:iconkuroi-ryu:
Oh. lol I gotcha. XD

Now that I really think about it, it does make sense..... Okay. ^^

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I fell in love with the impossible
I fell in love with tomorrow
but tomorrow never came.
Tomorrow became today
:iconenchiladaofdoom:
I like it. Made me smile.

Also, I know exactly what you're talking about.

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"You put your camera around your neck along with putting on your shoes, and there it is, an appendage of the body that shares your life with you."
-Dorothea Lange
:iconcyanidepoisoning:
:D Yes lately I've been more of a social deviant than an artist. :giggle:

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:music: come on baby, won't you show me what you got yeah, i want your salvation......
:iconhelloelise:
really nice. short, sweet, simple, to the point....to a good point, mind you. nice to see something fresh with more of a :) than a :(.
lovely job.
:iconbled-for-you:
awe, I like this..I like the word fuzz..alot, lol, but, I'm weird like that. You're awesome!

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Wish you were here...

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